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My First Butterfly

My First Butterfly
著作権: Lori Cannon (LCannon) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 374 W: 137 N: 804] (3107)
ジャンル: Animals
メディア: カラー
撮影した年: 2006-06-16
カテゴリー: Insects
カメラ: Kodak Easyshare LS753
Exposure: f/3.0, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): My Top Favorite Photos [view contributor(s)]
アップロードした日: 2006-06-16 22:50
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...and now for something completely different! After all my dark moody beach scenes, I thought this was a bright change. This is my very first photograph of a butterfly.
Today two of my daughters, my son-in-law, and I went to the Oregon Zoo's Winged Wonders exhibit. This is my first visit, and my main desire was to get at least one good butterfly photo.

I really have no idea what kind of butterfly this is, and since I don't know much about the different varieties of butterflies I don't want to guess, I'm sure someone here knows what this variety is called.

Photo: Cropped, Brightness/contrast, resized, sharpened.

mbasil, jeanpaul, lovenature, phlr, cas_orla, loot, ramthakur, Christopher_PL, firelord has marked this note useful
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To mbasil: Your workshopLCannon 1 06-18 02:07

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Wow, Lori. Great color, and I like the diagonal composition. It's one heck of a start. My only suggestion would be to trim a bit from the bottom to get an ever stronger diagonal, and to leave out some of the extraneious stuff on the bottom.

Bonjour Lori
C'est une excellent Prise de vue avec un super macro d'un tr鑚 joli papillon! La composition tr鑚 jolie avec de belles couleurs, grande acuit et d騁ails. Merci pour le partage .
Au revoir et merci passe un bon week end....JP

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3277 W: 148 N: 6163] (18832)
  • [2006-06-17 0:10]

Woooo, nice one Lori! And what a brilliant fellow he/she is too. These butterfly places are so good to visit, we get to see these wonderful creatures that we would have no chance of seeing any where else - well, like a Zoo.
Good composition, colours and sharpness, all over - well done,

Such vivid colours Lori. Detail, exposure and composition are great. I've never seen a lime green butterfly. TFS Janice

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  • phlr Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1237 W: 130 N: 882] (2821)
  • [2006-06-17 3:53]

Excellent Lori!
Wonderful on colours!
Excellent POV with wigns wide open!
Exellent on DOF and details!
Deserves more then 2 points!
Keep on going and TFS!

Hi Lori

A lovely shot. Nicely composed with excellent exposure, POV and depth of colour. Sharpness and clarity are spot on. Nice work. :-)

Hullo, Lori!

Good shot! Sharpeness and vivid colours!

Go on and TFS.

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  • Karin Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 418 W: 5 N: 268] (2089)
  • [2006-06-17 7:27]

Hi Lori,
This is very very beautiful !!!
Fantastic colors , super compo and great details.
A perfect shot! Congratulations! Would like to give you more points.

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  • jmp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1659 W: 95 N: 2273] (8415)
  • [2006-06-17 8:26]

Hi Lori,
A very very beautiful butterfly that you have presented with a natural color, great sharpness, good composition and a very good backgroud. A lovely shot!
Jos M.

This is the most amazingly beautiful butterfly you have got here, Lori; I love its black and yellow colors. I think this is the first of its kind on the TN, even though I may be wrong.
Brilliant POV and DOF and delightful colors.

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  • OzBY Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 183 W: 2 N: 351] (1355)
  • [2006-06-17 17:09]

Great picture of this butterfly. Great color and sharpness.


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  • manyee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3089 W: 230 N: 6774] (23770)
  • [2006-06-17 20:48]

Congratulations on your first butterfly, Lori.
It is absolutely gorgeous. That neon green with the black is out of this world. You captured with with perfect focus and exposure, and the POV is fantastic.
It makes me want to go to the exhibit.
TFS this beauty. : )

Almost perfect picture. Excellent composition and the background. Very good colours and sharpness. TFS


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