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著作権: laurent crouzier (marmottelolo) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1769 W: 424 N: 2889] (14697)
ジャンル: Animals
メディア: カラー
撮影した年: 2006-03-17
カテゴリー: Birds
カメラ: Konica Minolta Dimage Z3, olympus convertisseur 1.7x, 52mm UV
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/100 seconds
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
アップロードした日: 2006-03-18 10:51
ページビュー: 3673
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[Note Guidelines] アーティストからのコメント [フランス語]
the sparrow is coloured much less than the other birds, but I made him a place in my gallery because I found it pretty.
good week end
French Name:
House sparrow
scientific Nom: To pass domesticus
Family: Pass駻id駸
Cuts: 15 cm

dew77, pablominto, anavazao, SkyF, PDP, Dando, scottevers7, wallhalla15, marhowie, thistle has marked this note useful
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  • dew77 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4432 W: 248 N: 4028] (13270)
  • [2006-03-18 12:15]

Hello Laurent!
What a cute and fat sparrow:).I liked POV,details,simple BG,eye contact and composition a lot.TFS...:-)

Hi Laurent...
Looks like it is quite cold there since he has blown his feathers like that..!
A well balanced composition, good DOF and a funny expression on your subjects face...
Pablo -

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  • pvs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1127 W: 254 N: 3161] (14464)
  • [2006-03-19 6:02]

Hi laurent,

What a cute fellow,nice pose you captured,
good POV and DOF,



It's so cute and have great colours!
Good DOF and POV!
Thanks ana:)

Great shot of this sparrow Laurent.
The colors are excellent and the sharpness is very good.
Very good POV and BG.

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2234 W: 188 N: 1912] (8073)
  • [2006-03-21 6:44]

Bonjour Laurent,
a very cute bird, some one fed it well during the winter. Great sharp details and wonderful colors. Nice composition and well framed.

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  • PDP Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 2821 W: 344 N: 3779] (11769)
  • [2006-03-21 13:30]

Hello Laurent, nice pose - all fluffed up like that. The lighting and colours are nice but I feel it is very soft in focus or was this a large crop?

Well done.

Well captured Laurent,
Good clear and sharp detail. Good colours, composition and exposure.
Thanks for posting, have a great week.

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1393 W: 119 N: 5267] (23955)
  • [2006-03-21 22:15]

Tr鑚 joli petit moineau, moi je les trouves tr鑚 beaux quand m麥e. Bien r騏ssie, bravo Laurent.


Beautiful shot Laurent.
I like the warm colours and the interesting position of the bird, like it wants to tell you something.

Regards, Petru

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  • Dando Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 637 W: 32 N: 792] (3084)
  • [2006-03-23 5:17]

Hi Laurent, nice composition. Details, colour texture and POV are good. The focus is a bit soft but a good shot anyway. TFS.

Hi Laurent,
He does not have to be colorful to be beautiful. He looks great chirping away. It does not look like he has gone hungry. A great OOF backround shows him well.

Hi Laurent
Cute bird.
Good POV, details and composition, but the picture is biot soft
Goutham R

Hello Laurent,
this is a very nice capture with great colours, sharpness and POV/Dof. This is a very nice composition. Thank you for posting.

Looks like a youngster, nice detail and exposure, well done.


Hello Laurent,
Great colors and exposure, excellent BG.
Well composed, very nice pose and POV.
Good detail. I can even see that tiny tonque, with the open beak here..Well done.

Hello Laurent,
Very nice shot. Great pose and POV, lovely colours of BG. Pity it's not sharper.
Anyway, well done on this one!

tu as bien fait de le publier, en effet il vaut le coup d 'oeil
vraiment jolie prise, nettte et attendrissante
on croirait que ce petit moineau vient de prendre son bain
continu cher laurent

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  • osse Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 955 W: 0 N: 89] (7805)
  • [2006-05-09 16:32]

Hi Laurent
Great shot. Lovely BG and pose. Good colours,sharpnes and POV
Well done


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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3277 W: 148 N: 6163] (18832)
  • [2006-05-15 16:47]

Little bundle of fluff! Cute baby sparrow, a litle soft, but a sweet photo. TFS

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  • ele Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 93 W: 15 N: 15] (382)
  • [2006-05-20 8:39]

complimenti bellissima foto vedo con piacere che ti piaciuto l'insettotto grazie

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  • pilonm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 588 W: 90 N: 975] (3321)
  • [2006-06-08 17:17]

Bonjour Laurent,

Belle photo d'un Moineau Domestique... Je vois bien ici que les notres ont 騁 import駸 de chez vous car ils sont tr鑚 semblables :-) La composition et la pov sont excellentes. Petit point faible: il semble un petit peu hors-focus... Ca demeure tout de m麥e une excellente photo! TFS.


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