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White Dots

White Dots
著作権: Everton De Melo (demeve) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 586 W: 12 N: 1682] (6165)
ジャンル: Animals
メディア: カラー
撮影した年: 2008-04-20
カテゴリー: Birds
カメラ: Canon EOS Rebel XTI (400D), Canon EF 70-300mm f/4-5.6 IS USM
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/2000 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
アップロードした日: 2008-04-28 11:07
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Today I'm posting a different picture.. since i could not get close enough with this terns, I made a composition to make them appear white dots in the beach... It worked
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To CeltickRanger: Asbeddemeve 1 04-28 20:55

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hello Everton

excellent idea to get dot effects on the water of these terns
and very well done, fine POV and DOF, excellent idea
of the panorama framing, but because of the reflexion
of that building (probably a hotel) on water, i would'nt give
panorama framing, instead i would crop at that part of the
image to remove all sign of civilisation from the photo,



Nice "group" shot Everton, the panoramic composition works well for this..I even like the buildings reflection right side, you've included mankind :)
Well done,

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  • MMM Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1114 W: 0 N: 2546] (11425)
  • [2008-04-29 7:22]

Hi Everton
Nice composition I aggreed with Howard comments and I would add that the POV is also good.
TFS Michel

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