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Hormon_Manyer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1439 W: 303 N: 2507] (9675) [2018-07-15 7:43]

Hi Luciano,
Superb shot, the way how you controlled lights (flash) is fantastic, such as the composition. Simply majestic. However, color-wise I'm not into the image 100%, white balance is a bit too much into the magenta on my screen. Except for this, a stunning photo.
Kind regards from Ireland, Lテ。szlテウ

Hormon_Manyer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1439 W: 303 N: 2507] (9675) [2018-07-15 7:34]

Hi Moz,
Beautiful macro, nice details, maybe except for the lower part of the wing, which is a bit OOF, although this was the closest part to the lens. Anyway, colors are nice and I like the semi-diagonal composition, too. Nice work overall.
Kind regards from Ireland, Lテ。szlテウ

Hormon_Manyer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1439 W: 303 N: 2507] (9675) [2018-06-17 8:58] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

Hi Arman,
Probably not the best quality ever, but quite interesting, at least I like underwater shots very much. Lovely scene. However, I feel the sea anemone should be a bit more off-centered as the composition's a bit static this way. I made a quick workshop to demonstrate this, I hope you find it helpful.
Kind regards from Ireland, Lテ。szlテウ

Hormon_Manyer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1439 W: 303 N: 2507] (9675) [2018-06-13 14:00]

Hi Luciano,
So, you're in Uzbekistan now... Great photos of the nests on the poles (+ of the mature/immature birds, obviously 笘コ). In my home country, Hungary storks are also nesting on light poles (sometimes on chimneys) in the villages. It's so good to see them on TrekNature, so, thanks a lot for sharing your images. Have a nice holiday!
Kind regards from Ireland, Lテ。szlテウ

Hormon_Manyer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1439 W: 303 N: 2507] (9675) [2018-06-13 13:42]

Hi Ron,
Nicely composed photo, but the moth and the flowers are oversharpened, or the image was overcropped. Probably some member mates saw a different photo - in my opinion this isn't your best. Just a personal opinion, obviously.
Best regards, Lテ。szlテウ

Hormon_Manyer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1439 W: 303 N: 2507] (9675) [2018-06-13 13:28] [+]

Hi Arman,
Beautiful species and very informative note. The photo's spectacular, too, however I find the crop too tight, I mean the wings of the moth are too closed to the edge of the frame. Thanks for sharing the story and the photo.
Kind regards from Ireland, Lテ。szlテウ

Hormon_Manyer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1439 W: 303 N: 2507] (9675) [2018-06-13 13:21]

very spectacular, tfs

Hormon_Manyer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1439 W: 303 N: 2507] (9675) [2018-06-13 13:20]

Hi Hasan,
Although the flowers should be a little sharper, the textures of the petals are gorgeous and the colors are nice. Would be nice to see the flowers from a lower PoV also.
Kind regards from Ireland, Lテ。szlテウ

Hormon_Manyer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1439 W: 303 N: 2507] (9675) [2018-06-13 13:15]

Ciao Silvio,
Nicely composed photo with great sharpness on the butterfly and smooth background - probably color-wise undersaturated a little or a touch too bright? Just a personal opinion, obviously.
Kind regards from Ireland, Lテ。szlテウ

Hormon_Manyer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1439 W: 303 N: 2507] (9675) [2018-05-27 10:36]

Hi Ben,
Great composition with the trio, however, I feel the image's a little bit overexposed. The scene's a bit busy with the grass-blades - it's useful to keep a scissor in the photo bag and remove at least those grass-blades which are between the subject and the lens, and may distract the overall view. I'm sure if you care about these, your next fly agaric photo will be a stunner! Good luck!
Kind regards from Ireland, Lテ。szlテウ